tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post2627223260979409457..comments2023-10-24T11:02:05.631-04:00Comments on Jules Out Loud: StolenEvonnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18053569885496919527noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post-67908920355982960982011-04-09T17:21:39.272-04:002011-04-09T17:21:39.272-04:00Weel Done!
The tension you created tied my stomach...Weel Done!<br />The tension you created tied my stomach in knots. Listening, praying he wouldn't come in. So sad. So awful.<br /><br /><br />The only concrit would be wondering if the last sentence is truly necessary.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post-80553678901600505902011-04-09T15:04:43.926-04:002011-04-09T15:04:43.926-04:00This made me so incredibly sad and, at the same ti...This made me so incredibly sad and, at the same time, so angry. That poor little girl!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post-20106003505810861062011-04-09T10:06:32.849-04:002011-04-09T10:06:32.849-04:00Great use of repetition to build suspense: clunk. ...Great use of repetition to build suspense: clunk. clunk.<br /><br />Well done and yeah, that got my hackles up and fists clenched.The mad woman behind the bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15329865928939993983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post-18751325259961186272011-04-09T03:47:27.621-04:002011-04-09T03:47:27.621-04:00Please tell me that this is fiction and not realit...Please tell me that this is fiction and not reality. Oy, it infuriates me to think about.Jackhttp://www.thejackb.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post-19723880861116508502011-04-09T00:02:08.031-04:002011-04-09T00:02:08.031-04:00Oh my gosh, my heart my breaks for that little gir...Oh my gosh, my heart my breaks for that little girl. I will be MJ's alibi if she shoots that A-hole.The Lovely Onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02116016955719774820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post-13085828342584789532011-04-08T23:09:36.005-04:002011-04-08T23:09:36.005-04:00I just want to shoot the bastard. To think some in...I just want to shoot the bastard. To think some innocent child has to bear this terror daily. A haunting piece you executed well.Everyone Knows Me Herehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05095377574493185305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8876226336155302681.post-73812721740483528962011-04-08T11:08:38.475-04:002011-04-08T11:08:38.475-04:00I just love your writing...as soon as I saw your l...I just love your writing...as soon as I saw your link for this prompt, I came over, knowing it would be great!! You didn't disappoint!<br /><br />This was powerfully written and I found myself holding my breath, waiting for something to happen. Poor little girl...unfortunately, I can relate to that fear.Helenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10743718606624231459noreply@blogger.com